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Fall to your knees
And look at the azure sky
smell the air
and live like you were about to die
do not wait or opertunity
live a life of ambition
live happily
consider it your most important mission
live free of worry
and holds close those dear
do not worry, who looks back in the mirror
Fall to your knees
And look at the azure sky
smell the air
and live like you were about to die
take life by the horns
jump right it
this house is warm
strangers and family all alike
hold them close
and never close your eyes
Fall to your knees
And look at the azure sky
smell the air
and live like you were about to die
©2005-2010 ~who-i-wanna-be
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:iconsilentmoviescream:
beautiful! and a good use of repetition. i like to see a positive poem for a change! there's too many depressing ones on here. :) well done!

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a cold&broken hallelujah.
:iconxdarkestlightx:
awesome!!! :hug: :glomp:

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"I must be dreaming or, we're onto something. I must be dreaming for, I don't fall in love lawlessly. I must be dreaming or, pinch me till waking. So undeniably yours, as long as I'm losing it so completely....Euphoria...."
:iconwho-i-wanna-be:
thank you!!! :hug: :glomp: :superduperhugofdoom:

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My Wife:
:heart: :love: :date: ~xLightsOutx~ :date: :love: :heart:
:iconxdarkestlightx:
super duper hug of doom huh?

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"I must be dreaming or, we're onto something. I must be dreaming for, I don't fall in love lawlessly. I must be dreaming or, pinch me till waking. So undeniably yours, as long as I'm losing it so completely....Euphoria...."
:iconwho-i-wanna-be:
yup. i hug you and you get inflicted with Doom. Then in 3 turns, you die.

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My Wife:
:heart: :love: :date: ~xLightsOutx~ :date: :love: :heart:
:iconxdarkestlightx:
*gasp* is there anyway to save me?

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"I must be dreaming or, we're onto something. I must be dreaming for, I don't fall in love lawlessly. I must be dreaming or, pinch me till waking. So undeniably yours, as long as I'm losing it so completely....Euphoria...."
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You're so good at coming up with rhymes D::heart:
It'd be really awesome if people actually lived like they were about to die lol~ Everyone would act so much happier and stuff (:...

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sketch blog: [link]
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or.. the world would go into total chaos ^^;
like.. constant rape/murder/theivory and what not

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My Wife:
:heart: :love: :date: ~xLightsOutx~ :date: :love: :heart:
:iconxlightsoutx:
Didn't think of that... XD Maybe having a depressed world is better than that XD;;

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sketch blog: [link]

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